Construction Post: Feedback to First Cut

We have finished editing our rough cut and we now have our first cut. These are the changes we made:

• The title colour - we experimented with red and pink.
• The 'blurry' scene of the protagonist holding his phone - we added a cutaway which is ideally a flashback of his life, in order to get the audience distracted from the blur but instead focus on the narrative of the music video. 
• The ending - we ended the music video to the protagonist dying, instead of restarting. 
• The protagonist walking down the stairs - one of our feedback of the footage being 'too long', we added a precision editing to keep the audience entertained.

So, we then showed a small audience our cut and filmed their feedback too (Preferably skip to 23 seconds)




Feedback received:

• Overall good feedback of first cut - they liked the editing and thought the lip miming was in sync, the camera angles and the narrative and artist of our music video. 
• The font colour is still an issue as different audiences have liked different colours - red or yellow base. We will be considering the feedback on them and play around with a range of different colours to see which suits it best (perhaps create a variety and ask an audience to choose which colour/s they think are the best).